fic | Real Subsumption [john/rodney]

I cannot emphasise this enough: rough draft, needed to post to make it in before the deadline. Corrections to come. This is still a rough draft for the reasons below, but I'd like to think of it as a final for the challenge.

Thank you to the lovely stop and trinityofone for beta, thoughts, comments, and general wonderfulness. What remains is my own.

(Also, I literally started this three hours before the challenge was due, only thought of the idea on Sunday, and I am well aware that this story is not coherent, not well-structured, not developed, etc. I'd like to think of this as a beginning, maybe something I could come back, an idea, but again as is, it really doesn't work and I acknowledge that.)

For the picfor1000 challenge. Can we notice me and my deadline love?

( real subsumption )