2006-02-01 05:09 am (UTC)
ghost_lingering: a pie is about to hit the ground (Default)
I did enjoy! It's a very good first vid--there's some great cutting back and forth between scenes, and the song is just on the edge of frenzied, which seems to fit RayK perfectly. There were a couple of parts when the POV seemed to switch, accidentally, but I tend to overthink POV when I'm watching vids, so that could just be me. Just a quick technical note--there's some weird stuff going on with the scan lines; I don't know if it's just my computer being funky or something that you did/didn't do while...I don't know, ripping or rendering or *something*. I have no clue what's causing it (obviously!), but I thought I'd mention it, just in case it's something easily fixed. Oh, and! One last thing: I love how the end mirrors the beginning. Great stuff! Thanks so much for re-uploading.
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